My Movie Trailer - Couples Only!

[ksduded]

Hiya,
I have just completed a 70 min movie that I was working on for that past couples of months. I have made the trailer which you can download from here

http://www.aural-visual.com/couples_only/

Its not completely in English so many ppl might not understand... but still I am open to an constructive criticism... so that it helps me in my next projects...

thnx.

[bendermac]

welcome to the forum ksduded

downloading your trailer now.
you said it's not entirely in english, then you should add english subtitles for the none english parts.

i'll write later how the trailer is

[Kn'thrak]

Thread Moved!
Welcome to the forum. We need more film makers here

[bendermac]

just watched the trailer...

not bad i must say but of course there are a few things you need to work on.

1. get english subtitles if you gonna release this trailer internationally
2. try to get a person who can speak more fluently english for the voice over
3. you used lacrimosa and i hope you acquired the right from immediate music if not, you better not release this trailer with this track or any other track from i.m.; especially if the movie is going commercial. the only thing you can do is get the rights to use the track. well, if you have the rights to use, then forget what i wrote

well, i hope i can see your trailer soon with english subs

[ksduded]

just watched the trailer...

not bad i must say but of course there are a few things you need to work on.

1. get english subtitles if you gonna release this trailer internationally
2. try to get a person who can speak more fluently english for the voice over
3. you used lacrimosa and i hope you acquired the right from immediate music if not, you better not release this trailer with this track or any other track from i.m.; especially if the movie is going commercial. the only thing you can do is get the rights to use the track. well, if you have the rights to use, then forget what i wrote

well, i hope i can see your trailer soon with english subs

I will be adding the english subtitles.... though I am not planning an international release. It was an experimental film, so for my next projects I will carry out things more professionally.

[Jokerelf]

That is your movie & trailer?that is so cool~~
in trailer you used NEED FOR SPEED 7's picture and immediate music

make a film is my dream,good luck for you

BTW:and the cool poster

[ksduded]

That is your movie & trailer?that is so cool~~
in trailer you used NEED FOR SPEED 7's picture and immediate music

make a film is my dream,good luck for you

BTW:and the cool poster

thanks, I have started work on another project which will be done with professional equipment and actors. I like the script, I hope it translates well...

I will update with the trailer here...

[Mithrandir01]

I think... great job!!! But... in my opinion, you make two different trailers. First (looks like teen drama movie) part doesn't fit with second (looks like Fast & Furious) part (hope you know what I mean). But editing is really good, music used very well. As Bendermac says... use someone else as voice over and do the english subtitles.

Better change music. I suppose, you don't have rights for "Lacrimosa"

After that... rule the world :big grin: